Dude what happend?
I you never thought you would go downhill this fast. You usealy never fail to impress with you other songs. Could it be the fact you put this one out real fast? I'm not trying to flame but heres how it goes
1.Repeats to much(needs fills, Intros, outros.)
2.I don't know if its your way of playing it but hear a flat note or two in the riff.
3.Probly could of added more precussion
4.You need a wider selection of insturments in it
5.Do a remake of this song thats better.
6.Your one of my favorite newgrouds artist
7.I'm still sitting there bymyself playing the rythm to Jolly Roger Bay. (MARIO 64 RuLeS!
Anyways this is just a minor set back for you. Everyone has there ups and downs. No hard fellings.
Skata